Wednesday, 10 September 2014

PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

His mouth went purple like a fresh grape, his skin was turning pale. His heart was frozen, his hands were rubbing against his arms, his teeth started to clatter, he started to shiver. His hands were quivering. He was wondering where he could get warm….

Can you guess what emotion he or she is having?